I started to improve these aspects of the presentation before the final presentation as suggested by the professor as showed below:
- Persona – Knowledgeable User
- Storyboard – Both Users
- Technical Diagrams – Data Flow Diagrams / Use Case Diagrams / Use Case Descriptions
In the knowledgeable user persona, there is just a minor improvement which can cause confusion for the reader is the job title that conflict the persona. Therefore, I have updated to a previous job to avoid confusion for the reader as the reader may question that what the job role of this persona is.
For the knowledgeable user, I went back to the drawing board to replace the drawled artefact with McQueen’s artefact to show how the user are actually interact with artefact as the professor mentioned that it is very similar with the knowledgeable user which can cause confusion. Therefore, the final outcome is that it has replaced with the real artefact and I have updated on the previous post.
For the beginner user, same situation again and I have went back to the drawing board to replace the drawled artefact with another McQueen’s artefact to distinguish between the beginner user and the artefact. Therefore, the final outcome is that it has replaced with the real artefact and I have updated on the previous post. Unfortunately, I have overwrite the two images which I cannot show the before and after the correction.
And lastly, after reviewed all of the technical diagrams I have decided to include level one and two data flow diagram and one of each from the use case diagram and use case description as I do not want to make it too complex for the panels to understand as the professor suggested try not to make it too complex and keep it simple.